68 lines
3.7 KiB
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68 lines
3.7 KiB
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From 07e7e0378c3f2b73e56e886f7a4b59068dbbbc55 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
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From: "Jason St. John" <jstjohn@purdue.edu>
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Date: Tue, 10 Dec 2013 00:10:03 -0500
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Subject: [PATCH] man: improve wording and comma usage in
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systemd.journal-fields(7)
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Improve wording under "Description" and "_KERNEL_DEVICE="
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---
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man/systemd.journal-fields.xml | 16 ++++++++--------
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1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
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index 8a15598..bb89ed5 100644
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--- a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
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+++ b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml
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@@ -51,14 +51,14 @@
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<title>Description</title>
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<para>Entries in the journal resemble an environment
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- block in their syntax, however with fields that can
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+ block in their syntax but with fields that can
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include binary data. Primarily, fields are formatted
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UTF-8 text strings, and binary formatting is used only
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where formatting as UTF-8 text strings makes little
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sense. New fields may freely be defined by
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applications, but a few fields have special
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meaning. All fields with special meanings are
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- optional. In some cases fields may appear more than
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+ optional. In some cases, fields may appear more than
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once per entry.</para>
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</refsect1>
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@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
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<term><varname>_UID=</varname></term>
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<term><varname>_GID=</varname></term>
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<listitem>
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- <para>The process, user and
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+ <para>The process, user, and
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group ID of the process the
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journal entry originates from
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formatted as a decimal
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@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@
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<term><varname>_CMDLINE=</varname></term>
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<listitem>
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<para>The name, the executable
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- path and the command line of
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+ path, and the command line of
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the process the journal entry
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originates from.</para>
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</listitem>
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@@ -389,12 +389,12 @@
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the major and minor of the
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device node, separated by <literal>:</literal>
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and prefixed by <literal>b</literal>. Similar
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- for character devices, but
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+ for character devices but
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prefixed by <literal>c</literal>. For network
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- devices the interface index,
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+ devices, this is the interface index
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prefixed by <literal>n</literal>. For all other
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- devices <literal>+</literal> followed by the
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- subsystem name, followed by
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+ devices, this is the subsystem name
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+ prefixed by <literal>+</literal>, followed by
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<literal>:</literal>, followed by the kernel
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device name.</para>
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</listitem>
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